发信人: zycw (淑女也疯狂@byhh), 信区: ANSI
标 题: Re: 第一幅
发信站: 日月光华 (2009年05月14日21:11:59 星期四), 站内信件
这牛外形不错
不过可能是因为是新手画
所以有一个新手的通病
总喜欢将复杂的图形加再图上
其实这样有时候视觉上会给人感觉有点繁琐
可以适量改简单的字符
另外就配色而言
红色的身体配白色的牛角和牛脚看起来比较突兀
我觉得不如用全用红色来的自然,可以用明暗红色交替
另牛身上有花纹,类似年画剪纸那种
嘿嘿...觉得索性不如多弄几个上面
下面是我对这幅图几处修改,今天网络不好,所以改得仓促,诸位看看就好
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【 在 linzhihuan (BigHuan|卡尔马克思) 的大作中提到: 】
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Sender: zycw Ladies are also crazy @byhh , message area: ANSI
Title: Re: First picture
Sending site: Sun and Moon Guanghua Thursday, May 14, 2009 21:11:59, site mail
This cow looks good
But maybe it’s because I’m a novice painter
So there is a common problem among newbies
I always like to add complex graphics to pictures
In fact, this sometimes feels a bit cumbersome visually.
Simple characters can be changed appropriately
In addition, in terms of color matching
The red body with white horns and feet looks rather awkward.
I think it would be more natural to use all red. You can alternate between light and dark red.
There are patterns on the cow's body, similar to New Year pictures and paper-cuts.
Hehe... I think it's better to get a few more of them.
Below are some modifications I made to this picture. Today’s network is not good, so I have to make hasty changes. Just take a look.
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