发信人: parameter (siji|蕉绿), 信区: ANSI
标 题: Re: 第一幅
发信站: 日月光华 (2009年05月14日21:17:22 星期四), 站内信件
哇,前辈出手@@
我画的话,尾巴那里应该不会用那个“人”字,对这种有前后遮挡关系的部
分,倾向于把后面的线条打断...
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【 在 zycw (淑女也疯狂@byhh) 的大作中提到: 】
: 这牛外形不错
: 不过可能是因为是新手画
: 所以有一个新手的通病
: 总喜欢将复杂的图形加再图上
: 其实这样有时候视觉上会给人感觉有点繁琐
: 可以适量改简单的字符
: 另外就配色而言
: 红色的身体配白色的牛角和牛脚看起来比较突兀
: 我觉得不如用全用红色来的自然,可以用明暗红色交替
: 另牛身上有花纹,类似年画剪纸那种
: .................(以下省略)
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____\ ____________________ / ( ______(__ /_____\_/(@)/_________________/ 伺机
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Sender: parameter siji Jiaolv, letter area: ANSI
Title: Re: First picture
Sending site: Sun and Moon Guanghua Thursday, May 14, 2009 21:17:22, site mail
Wow, senior takes action@@
If I were to draw it, I wouldn’t use the word “human” on the tail. This would be a part that has a front-to-back occlusion relationship.
points tend to interrupt the following lines...
Mentioned in zycw Ladies Are Crazy @byhh's masterpiece:
: This cow looks good
: But maybe it’s because I’m a novice painter
: So there is a common problem among newbies
: I always like to add complex graphics to pictures.
: In fact, this sometimes feels a bit cumbersome visually.
: Simple characters can be changed appropriately.
: In addition, in terms of color matching
: The red body with the white horns and feet looks rather awkward.
: I think it would be more natural to use all red. You can alternate between light and dark red.
: Another cow has patterns on its body, similar to New Year pictures and paper-cuts.
: ............. omitted below
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Source: Sun and Moon Guanghua bbs.fudan.edu.cn [FROM: 10.8.225.9]