发信人: Castellio (percyshelley|Right to Heresy)
标 题: 二、绝爱风流最擅场:《白鹤》
发信站: 日月光华 (2011年02月10日12:58:05 星期四), 站内信件
下面这幅画的作者——windream风梦老师,她本身主攻线条画,在色块画方面并不十分
擅长。但她这幅《白鹤》,却是别有韵味。正因为她熟悉线条画得技法,这幅色块作品
却很有线条的风格。而得益于她流畅细腻的线条风格,才使得这幅作品没有“线条画法
画色块”那种怪异的感觉,反而有了清新脱俗、蕴藉自然的意味。
废话太多了,先上图,请按space
发信人: windream (0024·2004·白鸽飞回), 信区: ANSI
标 题: 白鹤
发信站: 日月光华 (2005年01月12日15:12:21 星期三), 站内信件
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先从技法上评价一下:可以看到,本图的色块技法又是很简单的那种。主体白鹤的躯干,
就是类似于一个四边形(众:。。。)而从细腿、长喙、羽毛来看,这些都是用线条勾勒
的。
但这幅图却有饱满的色块图效果,值得注意的就是它的构图。云彩、日出、白鹤和水草
都是简单几笔,但都恰到好处。尤其是日出这部分,成功地用色块刻画出红日的残影,
配合白鹤的目光,让整个画面浑然一体。
提起构图,还有一幅类似的作品也是值得一体的,
那就是lastwaiting(瀚海星云)的《沙洲冷》,请按空格键
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这也是一幅相当精彩的作品,它绝妙之处一是成功刻画出鹤展翅的神态,色块过渡很流畅
;二是黑色镂空的处理方式,让作品别具韵味。
但与风梦老师大作比较而言,在构图上就稍显单薄了。鹤只有影子,加上稀疏的树枝,虽
然同样给人寂静甚至有些孤冷的感觉,但画面不够饱满。
顺便说一句,构图是个非常见技术的活。固然在白鹤的基础上加了草、日出和云彩会让
画面饱满,但如果处理不当,反而会给人杂乱的感觉。个人的经验是要虚化背景物体(云
彩、日出之类),合理安排位置。不过我自己也时常因为太注重不必要的细节,搞不好
构图这一块,哎哎。
再有,想借这幅图说说我的一些作画经验。sylow大侠曾经说过,线条色块的结合使用,
是暗丝画的最高境界。但我一直觉得,只有线条色块的流畅、合理结合,才是最高境界
,两者不能浑然合一,只会让人觉得繁琐冗余。
可以回头看看《白鹤》的翅膀部分
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在翅尖这里,由简单的线条|/代替了白色的色块,以表现白鹤黑色(?)的羽毛。而其中
用斜线/与三角色块◢连接,辅以其他的竖线、斜线,过渡非常流畅自然。这点在色块作
画中,是提高视觉舒适感的关键。
另外,白云黄鹤的zycw也有一系列关于鹤的佳作,选择其中的《白云黄鹤》,比较两人
风格的不同。
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发信人: Beller (◇欢颜◇), 信区: ASCIIArt
标 题: 白云黄鹤
发信站: BBS 大话西游站 (Fri Jun 3 20:13:11 2005), 转信
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严格意义来说,白云黄鹤应该不算空格动画吧,因为它帧数太少,
当初草稿时想以白云黄鹤为主题,画出各种鹤的姿态,结果发现
这样空格串联起来更是便于观看效果^^
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关于《白云黄鹤》有一个空格动画,大家可以自己去看下,这里就只选第一幅了。
可以看到,zycw完全采用色块来描绘鹤的躯干,立体感更强了。但风梦结合线条色块,
显得更加细腻流畅。
另外,《白鹤》中颜色的使用也颇为讲究。不同于zycw使用亮灰、白色和绿色,风梦只使
用了红、白、黑三种颜色。等等,是不是想问,黑色怎么能也算是一种颜色呢?
答案是,黑色不但是,还是色块中最好的一种颜色。因为黑色搭配任何其他颜色,都能行
成最强烈的对比;而且黑色与很多图的背景色一致。使用黑色,能让物体更加鲜明出众。
相对而言,亮灰的使用就不是那么理想了(当然没有批评zycw的意思,她用得还是很好的
。。。)。因为亮灰和大多数颜色的区隔不是很明显,大面积使用显得模糊不堪。当然,
在细处用亮灰点缀,效果还是不错的。
本点评over,我一篇比一篇罗嗦了。。。
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Sender: Castellio percyshelley Right to Heresy
Title: 2. The best scene of love and romance, Bai He
Sending site: Sun and Moon Guanghua Thursday, February 10, 2011 12:58:05, site mail
The author of the painting below is teacher windream Fengmeng. She specializes in line drawing and is not very good at color block drawing.
She is good at it, but her painting "White Crane" has a unique charm, precisely because she is familiar with line drawing techniques. This color block work
But it has a very line style. Thanks to her smooth and delicate line style, this work has no line drawing method.
The weird feeling of painting color blocks has a fresh, refined and natural meaning.
Too much nonsense. Let’s take the picture first. Please press space.
Sender: windream 0024 2004 The white dove flies back, message area: ANSI
Title: White Crane
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Let’s first evaluate the technique. You can see that the color block technique in this picture is very simple. The main subject is the torso of the white crane.
It is similar to a quadrilateral. Judging from the thin legs, long beak, and feathers, these are all outlined with lines.
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But this picture has a full color block effect. What is worth noting is its composition: clouds, sunrise, white cranes and water plants.
They are all simple strokes, but they are all just right, especially the sunrise part, where the afterimage of the red sun is successfully depicted with color blocks.
Together with Bai He's gaze, the whole picture becomes one.
Speaking of composition, there is a similar work that is worth integrating.
That is Shazhou Leng of lastwaiting Hanhai Nebula. Please press the space bar.
Silence pick up
"﹨ Loneliness is exhausted
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This is also a very wonderful work. One of its wonderful features is that it successfully depicts the crane's spread of wings. The transition of color blocks is very smooth.
Second, the black hollow treatment gives the work a unique charm.
But compared with the masterpiece of Teacher Feng Meng, the composition is a little thin. The crane only has a shadow and sparse branches.
Although it still gives people a feeling of silence and even some loneliness, the picture is not full enough.
By the way, composition is a very common technical task. Although grass is added on the basis of the white crane, the sunrise and clouds will make
The picture is full, but if not handled properly, it will give people a cluttered feeling. My personal experience is to blur background objects and clouds.
Arrange the location reasonably, such as color, sunrise, etc. However, I often pay too much attention to unnecessary details.
This is the composition of the picture. Hey.
Furthermore, I would like to use this picture to talk about some of my painting experience. Master Sylow once said about the combined use of lines and color blocks.
It is the highest state of dark silk painting, but I have always felt that only the smooth and reasonable combination of lines and color blocks is the highest state.
If the two cannot be integrated into one, it will only make people feel cumbersome and redundant.
You can look back at the wings of the white crane
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At the tip of the wings, simple lines replace the white color blocks to express the black feathers of the white crane.
Use diagonal lines to connect with the three character blocks, supplemented by other vertical lines and diagonal lines. The transition is very smooth and natural. This is done in the color blocks.
Painting is the key to improving visual comfort
In addition, Baiyun Huanghe's zycw also has a series of excellent works about cranes. Choose one of them, Baiyun Huanghe, to compare the two.
difference in style
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Title: White clouds and yellow cranes
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Strictly speaking, Baiyun Huanghe should not be considered a space animation because it has too few frames.
When I was first drafting, I wanted to draw various crane postures with the theme of white clouds and yellow cranes. It turned out that
In this way, the spaces are connected in series to make it easier to see the effect^^
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There is a space animation about White Clouds and Yellow Cranes. You can check it out for yourself. I will only select the first one here.
It can be seen that zycw completely uses color blocks to depict the crane's torso, which makes the three-dimensional effect stronger, but Fengmeng combines line color blocks
Appears more delicate and smooth
In addition, the use of colors in White Crane is also quite particular. Unlike zycw, which uses bright gray, white and green, Fengmeng only uses
I used three colors: red, white, and black. Wait, are you wondering, how can black be considered one color?
The answer is that black is not only the best color in the color block, because black can be matched with any other color.
It creates the strongest contrast, and black is consistent with the background color of many pictures. Using black can make objects stand out more clearly.
Relatively speaking, the use of bright gray is not so ideal. Of course, I don’t mean to criticize zycw. She still uses it very well.
Because the difference between bright gray and most colors is not very obvious, it looks blurry when used in a large area. Of course
The effect of using bright gray embellishments in details is quite good.
This review over makes me more verbose than the last one.
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