发信人: Castellio (percyshelley|Right to Heresy)
标 题: 五、路转溪桥忽见:《水乡-十二月历》
发信站: 日月光华 (2011年02月14日13:40:59 星期一), 站内信件
评论之前,先说明一下,haoyuan的《水乡-四季》有四幅画面。
但我很无理地没选择任何一幅,而选了改编版的《未名十二月历》,只是
因为不太喜欢图画右面的那棵树。。。之后我详细吐槽一下,haoyuan殿
得罪了。
回到正题,忽然发现自己喜欢的色块,多半都是风景类的。很大程度上,
这是因为人物类色块看得太多,有点审美疲劳了吧。。。
另外,画得精致固然很好,但经典的作品,必须要画人所未画,有别具一
格的创意想法么。
而haoyuan的这幅作品,L4KevinX等人已经有了专门评价,我们先来看看
这幅图,再来看看别人是怎么评价的(众:你这是偷懒凑字数么?!)
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不得不说,这幅图最大的亮点,是很有泼墨山水画的神韵。以大块黑色铺出房屋的
屋顶,再以似断实连的墨线勾勒出房屋的结构,营造出了水乡迷蒙的景象。
不知道大家有没有看过那些描绘江西婺源、安徽古村的黑白山水画呢,就是这个
感觉。
另外L4KevinX关于本图有好几次评论,选取一段:
构图我很喜欢,在色块中营造纵深感是我的弱项,
尤其在颜色用的很少的时候。
配色上我也很欣赏这种三色色调的风格
下半部水和树逐渐融为一体的气场很和谐
可能是局限在色块的像素数比较低吧
一些细节表现的还不是很理想
比如树上的亮绿有点锯齿感了
不过亮色的确限制太大,很头疼
……而且黄白搭配在河蟹度上胜于绿白
14的评价,是针对haoyuan的《水乡-四季》的,我转载其中秋、冬两幅,大家也可
以比较它们和我所推荐的那幅,有什么不同。
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14的评价,涉及到本图的几点:透视、配色、高亮。下面就是我的集中吐槽
时间,得罪得罪。
关于透视,的确,本图以黑色作为屋顶,收到了很好的间隔效果,增强了图
画的纵深感。我更坚信了:黑色是塑造色块立体感和透视感的绝佳颜色。
但我个人感觉,《水乡-四季》的黑色使用过多,反而过犹不及。尤其是左侧
的 <- 状黑色,没有很好地区隔开,让人有种摸不着头脑的感觉。
相比之下,第一幅《未名十二月历》的黑色使用适中,效果更好。这就像山
水画中,适当用墨才能更见神韵么。
关于配色,我倒觉得,《水乡-四季》中右侧那些树设成黄色、绿色之类,殊
无必要。因为这样一来,图画的左右两部分感觉太不一致了。左侧的房屋桥
梁是以黑色块+线条,精雕细镂,很有山水画的风韵;但右侧的树用大面积的
黄色、绿色渲染,又有水彩画的感觉。固然,山水画里也有设色渲染的彩色
作品,但这在暗丝图中是很难实现的。山水画的设色,各种颜色见差别不大,
过渡很柔和,这恰恰是色彩对比鲜明的色块图难以实现的。
而《四季》中,倒是 冬 那幅图感觉最好,很有“寒鸦千万点流水绕孤村”
的感觉。
啰嗦这么多,就一句话:个人更偏好作为未名十二月历的那幅,原因就是那
幅图黑色使用得当、配色协调。
顺便说说模仿国画的暗丝图创作,这类作品真是不多。印象中精彩的作品,
当然首推flubber的《梅兰竹菊》和Gatchaman的《骏马图》,但两者都是
以中小等的物件入手的,这样也容易刻画细节。大场景描绘中,除了haoy
uan的作品,还有flubber的《江雪》外,还有一幅名不见经传的图画,印
象也很深。
那就是coni(鼓浪听涛)的《水墨画》,请按空格键
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不可否认,本图有使用亮灰色过多、右方和下侧山石过渡不流畅的缺点。但整体
感觉上讲,还是颇有味道的。
呃。。。这两天虚火过旺,点评中信口雌黄,说错还请不吝指教,///bow
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Sender: Castellio percyshelley Right to Heresy
Title: Five Road Turns Around the River Bridge Suddenly Sees Water Town Twelve Month Calendar
Sending site: Sun and Moon Guanghua February 14, 2011 13:40:59 Monday, site mail
Before commenting, let me explain that there are four scenes in Haoyuan’s Water Village Four Seasons.
But I unreasonably didn’t choose any one and chose the adapted version of the Unnamed December Calendar.
Because I don’t really like the tree on the right side of the picture, I will complain about it in detail later.
excuse me
Back to the topic, I suddenly discovered that most of the color blocks I like are landscape-based, to a large extent.
This is because I see too many character-like color blocks, and I feel a bit tired of aesthetics.
In addition, it is good to paint exquisitely, but classic works must be painted that have never been painted before and are unique.
Any creative ideas?
As for haoyuan’s work, L4KevinX and others have already made special comments. Let’s take a look first.
Let’s see what other people think of this picture. Are you being lazy and trying to make up for the word count?
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I have to say that the biggest highlight of this picture is that it has the charm of a splash-ink landscape painting. The houses are paved with large black blocks.
The roof outlines the structure of the house with ink lines that seem to be broken and connected, creating a misty scene in the water town.
I don’t know if you have seen those black and white landscape paintings depicting ancient villages in Wuyuan, Jiangxi and Anhui. This is it.
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In addition, L4KevinX has several comments about this picture. Select a paragraph.
I really like the composition. Creating a sense of depth in blocks of color is my weakness.
Especially when little color is used
In terms of color matching, I also really like this three-color style.
The aura of the lower half where water and trees gradually merge into one is very harmonious.
Maybe it’s because the number of pixels in the color blocks is relatively low.
Some details are not quite as good as they should be
For example, the bright green on the trees looks a bit jagged.
But the bright colors are really too restrictive and give me a headache.
And the combination of yellow and white is better than green and white in terms of color
14 reviews are for Haoyuan's "Water Village" Four Seasons. I reproduced two of them, autumn and winter. You can also
to compare them with the one I recommend.
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14 comments: Several points related to this picture: perspective, color, and highlight. Here are my concentrated complaints.
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Regarding perspective, indeed, this picture uses black as the roof, which has a good spacing effect and enhances the picture.
The sense of depth in the painting makes me even more convinced that black is an excellent color for creating a three-dimensional sense of color blocks and a sense of perspective.
But I personally feel that the use of black in Water Town and Four Seasons is too much, which is more than enough, especially on the left side.
The <-like black color is not well separated, which makes people feel confused.
In contrast, the first Unnamed December Calendar uses moderate black and the effect is better. It is like a mountain.
Can the charm of water painting be enhanced by using ink appropriately?
Regarding color matching, I think the trees on the right side of Water Village Four Seasons are particularly special if they are made yellow, green or the like.
It's unnecessary because the left and right parts of the picture would look too inconsistent. The house bridge on the left.
The beams are made of black blocks and lines, which are carefully carved and have the charm of landscape paintings. But the tree on the right is made of large areas.
Yellow and green rendering have the feeling of watercolor painting. Of course, there are also color renderings in landscape paintings.
Works But this is difficult to achieve in dark silk paintings. There is not much difference in the colors of landscape paintings.
The transition is very soft, which is exactly what is difficult to achieve with color block diagrams with sharp color contrasts.
Among the four seasons, winter is the best, and that picture feels the best, with tens of thousands of jackdaws and running water surrounding the isolated village.
a feeling of
So much verbosity. Just one sentence. Personally, I prefer the Unnamed December Calendar. That’s the reason.
Proper use of black in pictures and coordinated color matching
By the way, let’s talk about the creation of dark silk paintings that imitate Chinese paintings. There are really not many such works. It’s a wonderful work in my impression.
Of course, Flubber’s Plum, Orchid, Bamboo and Chrysanthemum and Gatchaman’s Horse Picture are the most recommended, but both are
I started with small and medium-sized objects, which makes it easier to depict details. I am currently depicting large scenes, except haoy.
In addition to Yuan’s works and Flubber’s Jiang Xue, there is also a little-known painting printed by
The elephant is also very deep
That is the ink painting by coni Gulang Tingtao. Please press the space bar.
With a hundred greens above, below the ape yellow, Fangran's land can be west, but it is difficult to open silkworms, Shu is in danger.
Hands ginseng steps into the mud, the crane returns high and has a high hook, and then collapses to serve as the hook, and comes to the country Cong Yu Dao Hu Xu "ヽ
Fuli Jiuhe, the river of desire rushes to the sixth level, even Tianshan Hengtai, Qinsi Sihe, reaches the highest level.
Yingjing folding plate, Du Fei, Bo Long, the ladder destroys all white and blocks thousands of fish and blues. It’s difficult.
Sitting upright and lingering in the pan, worried about Shang, Ni Hui, Shi Zhuang'eyou, connected to the sky.
Changweiyan can’t be climbed and folded. The stacker and the bird are thousands of people.
Sighing before aiding the road of death, Yan Sui
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It is undeniable that this picture has the shortcomings of using too much bright gray and the transition between the rocks on the right and the lower side is not smooth, but overall
It feels quite tasty.
Uh, I've been too weak these past two days, and the reviews are very inaccurate. If I'm wrong, please don't hesitate to give me some advice. Bow
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Where can I find my lost paradise among steel and concrete? " " "
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