发信人: haoyuan (好圆@bdwm), 信区: ANSI_Train02
标 题: Re: [转载]梅花 by aqua
发信站: 日月光华 (2010年06月05日12:36:31 星期六), 站内信件
还有 这幅画从构图上画面太满 右下角的留白有些不够 显得内容分散也是一个问题
【 在 haoyuan (好圆@bdwm) 的大作中提到: 】
: 这幅画有个比较大的问题——
: 墙上瓦片太完整了，占据了很多行，把主体内容的位置压得很低。
: 改进意见是“||”可以去掉一行，当然这不是关键，关键是让一些枝条和花伸出墙去。
: 另外颜色上暗黄和暗青都是很难搭配的颜色，瓦片不妨换做亮灰，窗户用白色。
: 假山石都用黄色太单调了，可以加入一些亮灰与白色的渐变把这堆石头的层次体现出来。
: 【 在 Castellio (percyshelley|Right to Heresy) 的大作中提到: 】
: : 【 以下文字转载自 ANSI 精华区 】
: : ︵ ︵ ︵ ︵ ︵ ︵ ︵ ︵ ︵ ︵ ︵ ︵ ︵ ︵ ︵ ︵ ︵ ︵ ︵ ︵
: : ||︶||︶||︶||︶||︶||︶||︶||︶||︶||︶||︶||︶||︶||︶||︶||︶||︶||︶||︶||︶
: .................（以下省略）
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Sender: haoyuanhaoyuan@bdwm, message area: ANSI Train02
Title: Re: [Reprint] Plum Blossom by aqua
Sending site: Sun and Moon Guanghua June 5, 2010 12:36:31 Saturday, site mail
In addition, the composition of this painting is too full, and there is not enough white space in the lower right corner. It seems that the content is scattered, which is also a problem.
Mentioned in haoyuan haoyuan@bdwm's masterpiece:
: There is a big problem with this painting.
: The tiles on the wall are too complete and occupy many rows, keeping the main content very low.
: The improvement suggestion is that you can remove one line. Of course, this is not the key. The key is to let some branches and flowers stick out of the wall.
: In addition, dark yellow and dark blue are difficult colors to match. You might as well change the tiles to bright gray and use white for the windows.
: The rockery stones are all yellow, which is too monotonous. You can add some bright gray and white gradients to reflect the layers of the stones.
: Mentioned in Castellio percyshelley Right to Heresy:
: : The following text is reproduced from the ANSI Essence Area
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: ............. omitted below
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o You are the killer!
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