Sender: crowyue Xiaozhu’s Sister Chicken Rice Ball No. 002, letter area: ANSI Train02 Title: Re: [Reprint] Plum Blossom by aqua Sending site: Sun and Moon Guanghua June 5, 2010 12:59:21 Saturday, site mail Hey, I’ve told a few people before that it’s getting harder and harder for newbies to become a dark silk artist. A picture like this should still represent the very high level at that time when it was drawn. Now that the standards have improved, it is inevitable that there are various problems Newcomers in the Age of Divine Creation may have fewer works to refer to, but if they want to become an average and good painter, there won’t be many. It doesn’t matter if you are a newcomer now. If you want to become a new generation of Shelley Hall, you have to surpass all the seniors. Very tired Mentioned in haoyuan haoyuan@bdwm's masterpiece: : Also, the composition of this painting is too full, and there is not enough white space in the lower right corner. It seems that the content is scattered, which is also a problem. : mentioned in haoyuan haoyuan@bdwm's masterpiece: : : There is a big problem with this painting. : : The tiles on the wall are too complete and occupy many rows, keeping the main content very low. : : The improvement suggestion is that you can remove one line. Of course, this is not the key. The key is to let some branches and flowers stick out of the wall. : : In addition, dark yellow and dark blue are difficult colors to match. You might as well change the tiles to bright gray and use white for the windows. : : The yellow color used for rockery stones is too monotonous. You can add some bright gray and white gradients to reflect the layers of this pile of stones. : : Mentioned in Castellio percyshelley Right to Heresy: : : ............. omitted below by hizsy [ < , ] .;;;;;;;. { > ; ; .' .< ;; ' ;; <> > ' ' << Little Detective < Produced by Sister Pig Threesome > ^ < > < > < Detective Story Source: Sun and Moon Guanghua bbs.fudan.edu.cn [FROM: 222.125.214.*]