发信人: BOneFiveER (某茄|水木新手一只), 信区: ASCIIart
标 题: Re: 韦特塔罗·0/1/2
发信站: 水木社区 (Mon Sep 1 23:23:40 2008), 站内
一
犹豫了一下,还是决定逐张py,因为斯基都p了,而且这里气氛比未名好
以下有很多观点也许和斯基冲突....囧
愚者,很多人都提到了腿,但是抛去细节,这张的构图是top3哦
魔术师,其实反正是这张让我学到了很多东西,比如背景植物的处理
也许并不是最适当的,确是另一种思路——这也是我从这套牌学到最深的东西
女皇,大家都说好,但是这类造型看的多了,反而有视觉疲劳呢
二
女皇比较完美,应该是衣服处理中最好的了
相比之下后面两个老男人就有点寒酸了
并不是说字符越多越华丽,像风梦老师经常可以用个位数的字符来画衣服
关键在光影转换的地方要表现出来
总之我也说不清....自己也画得很烂,让斯基来教好了
三
恩,不客气的说,这三张都有毛病
第一张的毛病在于天使的处理上
衣服和脸和翅膀没有完全分离
当然我也明白不好滥用他色,或许可以尝试留白?
第二张的毛病在于武士的面部....如果是我肯定挡字诀
第三张算是很好的,但是背景相较于前景有一种不协调感....?
不过在这方面我很挑的
四
隐士和命运之轮,算是很准确的把握住了,不错
正义的问题在于衣服
五
倒吊人!呐呐这就是我说的气场
一旦气场到了,细节根本不重要啊啊啊啊....[[被人拖下...
呃,回来了
倒吊人背景的植物真的很好
死神呢....气场就输了
而且细节也不大行,还好颜色还是不错
节制,人人夸的牌
但是言重的问题在于上衣和裙子等宽等高...
六
魔鬼的一个问题反而是颜色,总觉得暗品色和暗黄色那么不搭呢...
塔不错,恩
星也不错
七
这三张的气场都很好
细节不管XD
八
这张最好,因为我最爱的就是黄绿青的搭配啊啊啊啊.....[[再度被拖下
最后
恩,再重复一遍,气场,气场,气场!!
这副牌细节修好了可以超过风梦塔罗....[[老师不要杀我....
但是,我觉得这样刚好
修细节的落玉就不是前无古人的落玉了!
完。。。
Sender: BOneFiveER Xie Mizuki Novice One, message area: ASCIIart
Title: Re: Waite Tarot 0 1 2
Sending station: Shuimu Community Mon Sep 1 23:23:40 2008 , within the station
one
After hesitating for a while, I decided to py each picture one by one because Ski was already p and the atmosphere here is better than Weiming.
There are many opinions below that may conflict with Ski... Sorry
Fool, many people have mentioned the legs, but aside from the details, the composition of this picture is top 3.
Magician. Actually, it was this picture that taught me a lot, such as how to deal with background plants.
Maybe it's not the most appropriate. It's really another way of thinking. This is also what I learned the most from this deck.
Queen, everyone agrees, but if you see this kind of style too much, you will get visual fatigue.
two
The Queen is perfect, probably the best at dressing.
In comparison, the two old men at the back are a bit shabby.
It doesn’t mean that the more characters there are, the more gorgeous they are. Teacher Feng Meng can often use single-digit characters to draw clothes.
The key is to show the transition between light and shadow
Anyway, I can't explain it... I'm terrible at painting myself, so let Ski teach me.
three
Well, to be blunt, there are flaws in these three pictures.
The problem with the first picture is the handling of the angels
The clothes, face and wings are not completely separated
Of course, I also understand that it’s not good to abuse other colors. Maybe I can try to leave it blank.
The problem with the second picture is the samurai's face.... If it were him, I would definitely use the word blocking technique.
The third picture is pretty good, but the background has a sense of incongruity compared to the foreground....
But I'm very picky in this regard.
Four
The Hermit and the Wheel of Fortune are pretty accurate. Not bad.
The question of justice lies in the clothes
five
The Hanged Man. Now, this is the aura I'm talking about.
Once the aura is there, the details don't matter at all...[[Being dragged down...
Uh, back
The plants in the background of The Hanged Man are really nice
As for the God of Death... his aura has been lost.
And the details are not great. Fortunately, the color is still good.
Temperance is a card that everyone praises
But the important thing is that the top and skirt are the same width and height...
six
One of the devil's problems is the color. I always feel that dark colors and dark yellows don't match...
The tower is nice, eh
The stars are pretty good too
seven
These three pictures all have a very good aura.
I don’t care about the details XD
eight
This one is the best because my favorite is the combination of yellow, green and green...[[Dragged down again
at last
Well, repeat it again, aura, aura, aura
Once the details of this deck are repaired, it can surpass Fengmeng Tarot....[[Teacher, please don’t kill me....
But I think this is just right
The Luoyu who fixes the details is no longer the Luoyu that has never been done before.
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