发信人: Kieslowski (under pressure), 信区: ASCIIart
标 题: Re: 韦特塔罗·0/1/2
发信站: 水木社区 (Mon Sep 1 23:04:50 2008), 站内
一
愚者的姿势就非常好,细节方面,裙边的处理可以参考茄的那套,腿
只画一根线的话终究感觉有点奇怪...
魔术师... 衣服的线条有些碎,脸和帽子也怎么交待清楚...
女祭司不错,线条比较的简洁流畅,背景很有距离感。
二
女皇不错,后面两个线条还是有点凌乱,大概用一些双字节
的arctan2斜线会好一些?
三
lovers很喜欢,三个人物,排列紧密还不互相混淆,不简单。
战车...人物的脸应该再修一下
力量这幅不错,人物姿势很优美,狮子初看不太好辨认,细看之下嘴和眼睛
都是很生动的。这么小的空间,细节就不强求了,能处理好那就是跳马和风梦的
高度了...
对了,力量的背景处理的不错,远景很有距离感。
四
Hermit:红色的棒子混到衣服的褶皱里面啦...
轮子:比较常规的画法吧,应该
justice: 剑太靠边,天平有点小,关键道具没有突出...
五
这三个大体上都不错,还是细节的问题...
节制的翅膀很发型很不错。
六
星星这个相当完美诶。
七
月亮的画法很有意思
太阳的人和马画的有点简略了...
审判不错,挺简洁。
八
茄很喜欢的一张,嗯,确实很赞。
人物比例有点问题,小腿短了...后面的是左腿吧,腿肚子贴到迎面骨了...呵呵
Sender: Kieslowski under pressure , message area: ASCIIart
Title: Re: Waite Tarot 0 1 2
Sending station: Shuimu Community Mon Sep 1 23:04:50 2008 , within the station
one
The Fool's posture is very good. In terms of details, the treatment of the skirt can refer to Qie's legs.
Drawing just one line feels a bit weird after all...
Magician... The lines of the clothes are a bit broken. How can I explain the face and hat clearly...
The priestess is good, the lines are relatively simple and smooth, and the background has a sense of distance.
two
The queen is good, but the last two lines are still a bit messy. Maybe use some double bytes.
arctan2 slash would be better
three
Lovers like it very much. The three characters are closely arranged and not confused with each other. It is not simple.
Chariot...the character's face should be retouched
The strength picture is good. The posture of the figure is very graceful. The lion is not easy to identify at first glance. If you look closely, you can see the mouth and eyes.
They are all very vivid. In such a small space, I don’t insist on details. If you can handle them well, you will be a Vaulting Horse and Feng Meng.
Very high...
By the way, the background of the power is well handled and the distant view has a sense of distance.
Four
Hermit's red stick got mixed into the folds of her clothes...
Wheels should be drawn in a more conventional way.
justice: The sword is too far away, the scale is a bit small, and the key props are not highlighted...
five
These three are generally good, but it's a matter of details...
Temperance's wings are very nice and her hairstyle is great
six
The stars are quite perfect.
seven
The way to draw the moon is very interesting
The drawing of the man and the horse in the sun is a little sketchy...
The trial was good and concise.
eight
It’s a picture I like very much. Yeah, it’s really great.
There is something wrong with the proportions of the character. The calf is too short... The one behind is the left leg, I guess. The calf is close to the bone on the face... Haha