发信人: BOneFiveER (某茄|鸡丝饭团001号兼糊饭团002号), 信区: ANSI
标 题: Re: Summer Holiday
发信站: 日月光华 (2009年10月17日16:17:23 星期六), 站内信件
确实干净一些的版本更好看
没啥建议的,如果说能力再强一些可以试试看人物形体的虚笔
这方面可以参考精华区windream老师的作品
【 在 zygh (昱昱) 的大作中提到: 】
: 本来就想画个女孩,后来越画越多,有点杂啦。。。前辈们给些修改意见吧~
: 原来的草稿我也发一个,帮我看看哪个好些
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Title: Re: Summer Holiday
Sending site: Sun and Moon Guanghua October 17, 2009 16:17:23 Saturday, site mail
The cleaner version does look better
I don’t have any suggestions. If you are more capable, you can try the imaginary brushwork of character shapes.
In this regard, you can refer to the works of teacher windream in the essence area.
Mentioned in zygh Yuyu's masterpiece:
: I originally wanted to draw a girl, but then the more I drew, the more I drew, and it got a bit complicated. Seniors, please give me some revisions.
: I’ll also send you the original draft and help me figure out which one is better.
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