发信人: parameter (siji|蕉绿), 信区: ANSI
标 题: Re: Summer Holiday
发信站: 日月光华 (2009年10月17日16:56:01 星期六), 站内信件
嗯...东西太多,而且没有拉开距离,于是显得很拥挤,这个跟海滩的特点是相悖的...
人物的比例不太对,小腿明显的短了...
还有就是线条太密集...这一点个人比较欣赏敝水anka同学的风格...
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Sender: parameter siji Jiaolv, letter area: ANSI
Title: Re: Summer Holiday
Sending station: Sun and Moon Guanghua October 17, 2009 16:56:01 Saturday, in-site mail
Hmm... there are too many things and there is no distance between them, so it looks very crowded. This is contrary to the characteristics of the beach...
The proportions of the character are not right, the calves are obviously short...
Also, the lines are too dense... In this regard, I prefer Anka's style...
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