发信人: windream (0024·2004·妖蛾子), 信区: ANSI
标 题: Re: [提高]第六章作业 by gdnh
发信站: 日月光华 (2007年09月06日21:43:18 星期四), 站内信件
维权档非常生动有趣,画面虽然只是用了简单的小地雷符号,却给人很工整、平衡的感
觉。美中不足是两句维权的画,上面离边框隔了一行,下面没有隔,如果是我会觉得怪
怪的(绝对平衡感癖-_-),不如提上一行、中间那行空白去掉啦。
自己的那个宣传qmd……走马灯这样用我觉得好眼花@@
smd创意很好,但仍旧闪的太多。。。比如为啥雨点要一起闪啊。。另外绿色的边框似乎
不是很协调,而且只有下半个包围?不知道是故意的还是啥?
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Sender: windream 0024 2004 Yao Mozi, message area: ANSI
Title: Re: [Improvement] Chapter 6 Homework by gdnh
Sending site: Sun and Moon Guanghua Thursday, September 6, 2007 21:43:18, site mail
The rights protection document is very lively and interesting. Although the picture only uses simple small landmine symbols, it gives people a very neat and balanced feeling.
I think the only fly in the ointment is that there are two lines of rights protection painting. The top is separated from the border by one line, and the bottom is not separated. I would feel weird if it were you.
Weird, absolute sense of balance addiction. Why not add a line and remove the blank space in the middle?
I feel dazzled when I use my promotional qmd revolving door like this.
smd is very creative, but it still flashes too much. For example, why do the raindrops flash together? In addition, the green border seems
It's not very coordinated and only the lower half is surrounded. I don't know if it's intentional or something.
Source: Sun and Moon Guanghua bbs.fudan.edu.cn [FROM: 220.234.228.139]