发信人: AnsiEditor (囧囧有神), 信区: ANSI
标 题: Re: [提高]第六章作业 by move
发信站: 日月光华 (2007年09月09日22:00:12 星期天), 站内信件
非常对不起move童鞋,这份作业我忘了转寄了><
move童鞋做了两个维权档,构图都非常不错,小脚丫的图案呼应了一步一个脚印踏踏实
实做ansi的主题,不足的是两个都用了这个脚丫图案……其实做维权档的意义之一就是
每个人用自己yc的、纯粹个人特色的东西来表现同一个主题,这样【维权】这个词说起
来才更响亮吧,呵呵
smd的作业略显花哨,其实花哨倒不怕的,但是move童鞋这个和前几个作业都有个同样的
问题就是整个画面显得很零碎,重点不够突出,使得作品显得很单薄,尤其里面左右两
边风格不同的叶子,还有风车(?;?),会破坏整体的协调感觉的。另外就是刷明暗的时
候刷的不够均匀,比如说silent raindrops,中间有个突出来的高亮字母,看上去会很
怪,嗯
捏捏,再次对不起><
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Sender: AnsiEditor囧囧有神, message area: ANSI
Title: Re: [Improvement] Chapter 6 Homework by move
Sending site: Sun and Moon Guanghua September 9, 2007 22:00:12 Sunday, site mail
I'm very sorry, move children's shoes. I forgot to forward this assignment ><
Move Children's Shoes has made two rights protection files. The compositions are very good. The pattern of the little feet echoes the steady steps one by one.
Implementing the theme of ANSI. The disadvantage is that both of them use this foot pattern. In fact, one of the meanings of doing rights protection files is
Everyone uses their own yc and purely personal characteristics to express the same theme. In this way, the word "rights protection" comes into play
Let's make it louder, haha
The assignments of smd are a bit fancy. Actually, I’m not afraid of being fancy. But the move children’s shoes assignment has the same thing as the previous few assignments.
The problem is that the whole picture looks very fragmented and the key points are not highlighted enough, making the work look very thin, especially the left and right pictures.
Leaves with different styles on the sides and windmills?;? will destroy the overall sense of coordination. Also, when painting with light and dark
If the brushing is not even enough, for example, silent raindrops with highlighted letters protruding from the middle will look very
Weird hmm
Sorry again ><
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