发信人: JuliaFrank (小卡那), 信区: ANSI
标 题: 点评 by BOneFiveER
发信站: 日月光华 (2008年10月23日22:03:12 星期四), 站内信件
那个....我是被小o拎来点评的其实....(小o:指,明明是主动来tk的),呃....
既然来了不说点什么总是不好的....首先呢,当然还是很感谢你如此看重小的我
的那点东西,其实也都是学来的,若是还合你心意的话,建议去看以下几位真·
前辈的东西:gegewu@bdwm、windream@rygh、loveyang@rygh和aqua@lsxk,基本
上都是我早期看来下的东西对我启发很大(说来惭愧....自己的雕虫小技偷得自光
华大师....)作为ANSI的新手上路,我想一方面多尝试是好的,当然也应该趁着热
情还在多看呢,光华的精华区是我看过所有精华里面做的最系统的,有空多翻,
你想至少我是把<光华原创作品集>翻过好几遍的....
然后,我觉得会做翻页作品的孩子已然是很不简单了,想我当年....连23行x80列
的规矩都是进了内部版才学的,所以前途无量啊无量!ANSI礼仪回答的非常好,
已然是行内人的语气,没什么好再建议了。而且我相信你的阅历也是大量了,难
得。作品方面呢....怎么说,构图其实是最基本的东西,但是确实很难把握,也
不是说都留白就是好,那是懒人用来忽悠的冷笑话。可以先考虑画一些素材吧,
比如今天画一个花瓶,明天画一个果篮什么的,这方面斯基(Kieslowski@smth)和
sylow的东西一定要看一定要看啊,然后就是尝试着,怎么把这些个素材弄成一副
整体的东西....恩,说了这么说,其实不急呢,慢慢来慢慢来。
最后,两幅东西画的不错啊,不过恩都有一个毛病,就是嫌颜色有点多....不过
可能是我自己本身的用色洁癖问题,总之作为新手已经很了不起了,加油加油。
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Title: Review by BOneFiveER
Sending site: Sun and Moon Guanghua Thursday, October 23, 2008 22:03:12, site mail
Well... I was brought here to review by Little O. Actually... Little O pointed out that he obviously came to tk on his own initiative, uh...
It's always a bad idea not to say something now that you're here... First of all, of course, I'm very grateful that you value me so much.
In fact, all the things I learned are learned. If you still like it, I suggest you check out the following real people.
Senior stuff gegewu@bdwm windream@rygh loveyang@rygh and aqua@lsxk basic
The above are all things that I read in the early days and were very inspiring to me. I feel ashamed to say that...my own little skills were stolen from me.
Master Hua... As a newbie in ANSI, I think it’s good to try more, of course, while it’s hot.
I’m still interested in reading more. Guanghua’s essence section is the most systematic among all the essences I’ve seen. Please read more when you have time.
You think at least I have read the "Guanghua Original Works Collection" several times...
Then I think it’s very difficult for a child to be able to do page-turning works. I think back then... I even had 23 rows x 80 columns.
The rules are all learned after entering the internal version, so the future is endless. ANSI etiquette answers are very good.
Since you are speaking like an insider, I don’t have anything more to suggest. And I believe you have a lot of experience. It’s difficult.
Well, as for the works... How should I put it, composition is actually the most basic thing, but it is really difficult to grasp.
It doesn’t mean that everything should be left blank. That’s a cold joke used by lazy people to fool people. You can consider drawing some materials first.
For example, today I will draw a vase and tomorrow I will draw a fruit basket or something. In this regard, Kieslowski@smth and
You must read sylow’s stuff. You must read it. Then I try to make these materials into one.
The overall thing... Well, having said that, there is actually no rush. Take your time. Take your time.
In the end, the two paintings are pretty good. However, Endu has a problem, that is, there are too many colors... However,
Maybe it’s my own problem with mysophobia. Anyway, as a newbie, I’m already doing great. Come on, come on.
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